Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Wed May 25



So .. what did we do today.

Well, first the good news: the date for the essay has changed to June 1.

The bad news is that the Journal is due today. And we had a unit test today. We also did some of the presentations. (link to Oakville Toastmasters is here, by the way) And we started Animal Farm.

The twisted part is that during the unit test, I realized I didn't have enough copies of the text, so I downloaded the iBook version to read and also found the Project Gutenberg version (.99 cents and free, respectively) The link on right is to the PG free version online.

I also said that I would post the rubric for the essay. Here it is:

Marking Rubric


Introduction           
General Sentence                    /5
               
2-3 elaboration sentences
               
thesis statements               



Organized paragraphs       
strong topic sentences                    /10
       
smooth transitions
               
strong concluding sentences
 
              


Arguments/Ideas/content
logical development           
evidence to support thesis                /10
   
           
restate thesis                        /5
               
offer final insight



And so ... I started to write the "Thinking on Paper" that I think you should do, too. I got this done in front of you, and will make better notes (and may post them tomorrow).



Finally, I took this really cool pic while you characters were writing the test:

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